How do you feel about helping me to write a scary ghost story? I can start it off, but then anyone can join in and write the next few sentences. All you need to do is to read what was written before, then carry on the story!
Here's the beginning.
… It was a dark and stormy night. Outside the wind was blowing through the branches of the old oak tree, making a "whoo.hoo" sound. Inside I was drinking a cup of hot chocolate in front of a warm, log fire. I was just about to get up to close the curtains when I heard a loud knock on the door…
11 comments on “An English ghost story”
I was not expecting anybody so I wondered who it could be. I opened the door and to my surprise I saw little child there on the doormat.
Iwonderd who could came in this time,and in this bad weather ;i felt scared then i waited to see if there is some one outside,but the door kncked again,and i opened the dooras i excpcted no one wos their ,so i went out to make sure that no body thier.
i went towindy there was a gost
when I heard the big sound after some was knocking the door.internelly i was very scared but I prayed the god after I was opening the door that time I saw one person but i couldn't seee his face but he was wearing black dresses,finally he told me I'm not a ghost ,he is our old driver.
i was so scared and trembled. my body was full of sweat. then i heard the voice was getting louder and louder and sometimes the voice slowed down. then, i said to myself "i must be brave. it's nothing. only illusion." so, i tried to ignore the voice. i ran into the window and shut the curtuins immadiately. as i was about to go to bed, i heard another weird voice. the voice was like a foot step, coming closer to me. i then suddenly cover my body with the blanket. however, the footstep was coming closer and closer. i could feel it. then i felt somebody tapped my back. the the voice said with a hard voice. "WAKE…..UP..WAKE..UP" and i yelled out loud………..help..help…somebody help me…..
the voice said,"dont yell!, am i deaf?" as i turned my body to see what happend i saw an old sad face man. i then realized that he is my grandfather. then i asked me, grandpa," what's the matter old grandpa?" have i had my …my… hot chocolate? replied grandpa
I was wonder, who might it be? My couriusity loosing my fear. I went to the door, and I opened the door, but nobody there. I looked at the yard, there wasn,t a sign that anybody there. Little get upset, I came inside house and locked my door. When my step got me to my bedroom, the knocking door, was heard. I came outside, when I opened the door, I was suprised by the cat that attacked me. After bit my hand, the scary cat ran into my house. Before my heart stop beating, something big and black was stand infront of me. It was my neighbor. He was looking for his madly cat, that he called little gosht.
The cup which I was holding fell down to the ground. I went to the door slowly and scarily. The wind blew though…
My chocolate lab, Daisy, sensed the danger. Growling, she approached the door. I crept around to the front room window, trying to sneak a look at who was banging on the door…
It'is a wonderful story.many thinks.
I was a little bit scared..but i went to the door to see who is it..suddenly i saw a little baby in his his bed crying with a paper next to him.
i look forword to see someone or trying to see who putted the baby in front of my house's door, but i coudn't see anyone, so i took the baby inside and i locked the door.
I took the paper and read it :
" dear girl, i know that u r a single who lives lonely, i am a widowed woman, with a baby,i can't give him anything and i have noone i my life no parents no friends, i wish that my child can have i better life, and with me no life i can' t let him be happy, so i pray you to take my baby and try to love him as it is yours..thanks from my sad heart).
when i red the paper, i took the baby in my arms and hold him,,and i took the decision to raise the baby.
as i walked to the door i wondered who it could be at this late hour. i opened the door and to my suprise at the door there was a beautifully engraved box. it had a line down the middle with an angel on one side and a devil on the other.
